Shameful_Zebra
Destiny Awaits
Last seen Nov 15, 21
United States
Forum Posts (206)
Hey! I love your enthusiasm and VR Alagaesia does sound really cool but I don't know how complicated that would be to set up. Either way onto your plot! I'll say this up front, since I'm only a terraformer, I'm not the most qualified to talk about building, if a builder reviews this plot, then listen to them, but I still wanted to point out a few areas that I think could use some improvement! So firstly, the ground. I know the grass blocks are covered in tall grasses, which is a good start, but there needs to be more. Maybe pick 3-4 flo...
Hey! I'll say right off the bat, your plot is a good start! There are several areas that I think you can improve in though. First off, get rid of the path blocks. They are repulsive. Even if you are making a path, I would recommend avoiding this block, it just doesn't look good. At all. Also on the subject of paths, around the edges of the plot, specifically the southern and eastern edges, you have it built up into a really unnatural hill and have paths that are inconsistent and look weird. The Hills, especially the southern edge of you...
hello! I'm so happy to see new interior designers!! Okay so based on the pictures, you seem to be pretty darn good, and there is little to complain about, though one of my big concerns is the paintings. Paintings in minecraft (for MCA purposes) are some of the most ugly things I have ever seen, and it is made even worse by the fact that you have an entire wall covered in them in picture one xD There are also a few things we should probably fix in the long run, such as not using patterns (carpet, wall, etc.) as commoners rarely had that. ...
Hey so I checked out your plot and it was a dragon! So the thing is, for Builder applications, we need to see what you are capable of house-wise. Normally its best to create a plot with a medieval house that would look good in a fantasy setting like Alagaesia. For Terraformer applications, you need to make a plot that demonstrates your terrain building abilities (as well as trees, rivers, etc.) I am looking forward to seeing what you create! If you have any questions feel free to message me. ~Zebra
Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (I am coming for you standn :LOL: )
Well I had plans for a shrine (and ofc I keep it in the enderchest, the dragon egg is my precious baby) but 18414403 wanted it for some glitching to the top of the nether thing, so I Lent him it, (reluctantly), and I still haven't gotten it back.
Hello, I am that selfish person.
Hey JackChristopher! Alright, first off, I love your enthusiasm to be part of the team :) ! Now, onto your plot, I do agree with the points 19113439 has made. I feel like it is best summed up as "Lack of Detail." Great plots really make you feel like you are part of an active world, through details in building, terrain, etc. My suggestion would be taking a look at plots around spawn (many of them are really good), In particular, taking a look at plot 1;1 and take note of how he uses gradual hills in his terrain, and differences in elevati...
Wow! Overall, this is really incredible! Your paths, custom trees, diversity in blocks in your dirt and stone, and the mix of regular tallgrass and things like tall ferns; they all look great! My biggest concern is that your overhand doesn't seem well supported from the bottom. Looking at it, you would expect that 90-degree angle to just snap in two and the overhang would crash down. Other than that though, this plot really shows that you are a capable terraformer! Good luck! -Zebra
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